本文有云课堂小编为大家带来 初中英语作文高分秘诀篇1:写作指导：最实际的中考英语作文获取高分的方法！
英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？ 一、写作诀窍 总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚； 关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整； 组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。 二、写作步骤 1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。 2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。 4.先草稿，后抄写。 三、习作点评 [2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分) Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇2:名师支招：中考英语作文轻松拿高分命题组完美传达了三个动向： 一、透过英语作文折射文字背后的思考，考察90后一代所思所想，所喜所恶。 2005年题目出现过Growingpainsandgains(成长的烦恼与收获)，探讨成长酸甜苦辣，2007年更是出了ThingsIhatetodo(我不喜欢做的事)这样意外的题目，在有限的时间内让考生说出心声。 对答方案： 平时增加思考力，对喜欢的，不喜欢的都应培养自己的见解，15岁的孩子思维上已发展得非常健全。有个孩子在一对一的课堂上对我说，他觉得写作文时立意高就能得高分，很羡慕一个同学能想出Teamwork(团队合作)这样的立意。因为他的英文语言表述能力不错，在讲课过程中，我就尤其注重启发孩子思考，让孩子自己说出心声，再提炼升华。交流过程中发现，孩子虽然初三，但已有去美国交流访问的经历，那样的一段经历中所学所得将是孩子一生的财富。就着旅行的细节提炼出的事件和论点，不但让孩子也惊讶地发现美国之旅的意义远大于时间上的的两周之行，亲身经历过便能娓娓道来，连语文作文也有了极好的素材，而且提炼出的论点正如孩子所说：立意深远。 二、以“我”为中心，由对“小我”的关注放大到对“大我”的体察。 1、几乎每年中考题目中都有一个隐藏的“我”(I、me或者my) 这是一个很好的提示，暗示学生由自己身边人，身边事出发，切忌泛泛而谈，空洞套话，最该引以为戒的是2003年ToBeaLovelyShanghainese(做可爱上海人)一题，虽有图画提示，但成也提示，败也提示。不少同学将主语延伸为“我们这些生长在上海的人以及出生在其他地方，后来的新移民”一个主语如此之大，写到后来更是苦不堪言，语言跟不上思想，脑子里思考着“改革开放”“日新月异”的宏观大词，下笔却一片空白，文章结构也零散歪斜，何必呢？其实，掌握中考规律后完全不会犯同样错误，记住一个“我”，以我为中心即可，我打算怎么做一个可爱上海人？是努力学好英文呢，还是争当志愿者，是热情帮助来华旅行的外国友人呢，还是遵守“七不规范”。一切都在一个“我打算怎么做”。 2、关注他人，架构联系 2002年以MyFavoriteThing(s)(我心爱之物)打开以“我”为中心的出题局面，2008年一题Lovearoundme(我身边的爱)则显山露水地开始关注起了“他们”，这个趋势必然成为今后几年中考出题趋势。 对答方案： 中考作文离不开话题四大类“个人、学校、家庭、社会”。考生应对日常生活应有所体察，对学校老师、同学这样的关键词敏感。还有一个技巧在这里教给大家，作文下笔前应在审题的基础上对题目进行拆分，请大家记住一个万能拆分法——3WH。WHO/WHAT(什么人或事)；WHY(为什么)；HOW(怎么做)，将此方法与“话题四大类”合并使用，文章即会逻辑清晰，言之有理。 我们试着对08年最新试题Lovearoundme进行拆分，第一个WHO：Who"slove?学校里有老师，有同学，他们的爱；家庭里有父亲，母亲，亲戚的爱，第二个HOW:Howtheyloveme?他们对我怎么好？具体的例子就能联想起来了，HOW:HowIwannareturnmylove?我如何回报这种爱？这里已经搜集了四种以上的爱，四种以上爱的方式，和四种以上回报的方式，作文中只需选取2-3种即可。 三、对英文输出能力的重视。 任何一篇英语文章论宏观指框架结构，逻辑连接，论微观论句式句型、词汇词组，中考作文也不例外。这里抛砖引玉，与同学共勉。 1、连接词是王道 连接词是中文语段中没有的词汇，也是英文写作中应该注意的重点。中文是高级语言，极其强大，只要对话双方或作者读者处于相同语境，无论思维跳跃多远总能拉扯上边。但英语中考作文中，中英文思维的差异性不可忽视，一句话只有一个主语、一个谓语，意思一旦表达完全，一句话就该马上终止。 以下连接词推荐同学们学会用到文章中。 开头：Tobeginwith,Tostartwith,Firstly,Firstofall。 表补充：notonly…butalso,furthermore,inaddition,moreover，thatistosay 表目的：inorderto,soasto,sothat 表转折：however,nevertheless,yet 2、砍杀第一词汇 要表达对一切“人、事、物”的喜爱之情是考生追求的，但简单一个"like"、"prefer"实难表达爱之深、情之切，此时完全可以自己总结归纳出一系列“喜欢”的词汇词组，如： BefondofEnglish BecrazyaboutEnglish HaveapassionforEnglish BeenthusiamaboutEnglish 词组间情感的强烈度请同学仔细体会。如果同学能够自己学会总结归纳，之后再出现“喜欢”这一词，就应该砍掉第一个浮现的简单词“like”，学会使用更准确的高级词组。
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇3:优秀中考英语作文三步走如何写好一篇60字的作文，争取18分的最大值，显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字“练”。目标有了，最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。 60字的作文，非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点，并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。 60字的作文最好先从结构上练起，一般要分这样五个层次：1)开始句2)向主体过度句3)主体叙述4)向结尾过度5)结尾。第一层开始句起着点题的作用，60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡，完成第四层，多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了，也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文，每句平均10字左右(每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整)，最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。 说到这里我们只解决了层次清晰、符合字数要求的问题。其次注意没有把握的句子不写，拼写要准确，叙述中没有语法错误，时态要符合背景。我们学了含不同从句的复合句。所以作文中应该适当地出现复合句。一定要注意词汇上的不必要重复和句式的单一。巧妙地插入平时积累的格言警句，使作文生辉。设法满足“词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如;文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达方式。”同时注意大小写、标点正确。 再次，一定注意作文的题内要求，往往是以问题形式出现为多，千万不可丢掉任何一个。 最后提醒大家注意的就是一定要打草稿，避免在卷面上涂抹。 以上这几点做到了，离满分作文也不远了。
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇4:中考高分英语作文范例赏析[学生习作A] My hobby is read books①。When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself. ①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 ②also的位置应放在can之后。 [点评]：档次9-11分。 ①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 ②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 ③有少量错误。 [学生习作B] My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ，my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books，I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future，so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true. ①开门见山、点题。 ②真情流露，理由充分。 ③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、 ④巧妙使用句型以表决心。 [点评]：档次13-14分。 ①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。 ②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。 ③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇5:中考英语作文范文集锦（精选10篇）英语中考作文焦点——以环保话题 今年几个世界大国首脑都参加了“八国峰会”，这次的主题是世界经济、能源问题和气候变化。经济发展离不开环境话题，能源使用必然污染环境，而气候变化就是经济发展和环境问题矛盾的产物。广西的城乡清洁工程表面就是环境整治问题。学校的两基工作从某种意义上来说其实就是学校环境改变没有。2008年北京奥运会也离不开环保这个主题。八荣八耻也有部分内容是关于环保主题的。总之，环境保护是当今世界难题。因此，中考的内容离不开以下这些范文要点，而且都是记叙文形式，有些句子相当有用，不论什么作文，都可以从下列文章选出相应句子，只需稍微改一下地名或主语，尽量减少语法错误，起码有4、5分是正确的。如：Throw the waste here and there(到处乱扔垃圾)变成Don~t throw the waste here and there.(不准乱扔垃圾)。“应该”变成“不应该”等等。我想中考作文完全可以取得高分。比如：作文题：1、职业：将来想干什？或者你的爱好是什么？（或者题目是：毕业之后）你可以写将来做一个环保注意者，如何做？做什么。2、如果题目是写我的班级、学校、家乡之类的更加可以谈到环保情况（讲现象，有好有坏，如何去改变？有什么措施？如何的美？）3、如果是写为什么北京有沙尘暴、为什么今年有些省份干旱少雨？为什么有些省份洪涝灾害严重。那就是环境破坏问题。因此关键最后几天最好能背熟这些范文。 尽量围绕环保展开主题，通过过渡句和环保扯上联系。比如：(过渡句)The most important question in the world today is pollution .（当今世界最重要的话题就是污染问题。） 范文提示 1) It’s our duty to save water（节约水是我们每个人的责任。） As we know , water is very important to man, （我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。）we can’t live without water. （没有水我们就不能生存。）The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. （适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。）But some people don’t care about it .（但是有些人却不关心或不在意。）They waste a lot of water in their daily life. （日常生活中他们浪费很多水。）Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.（更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。） They throw rubbish into rivers , too. （他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。）Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。） Something must be done to stop the pollution. （人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。）Only in this way can we live happily.（只有这样，我们才过得幸福开心。） If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.( 如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪) 2) Planting trees Trees are very helpful and important for us. （树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。）We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. （为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。）It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.（爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。） 3) 旅游介绍 预览摘要： 北京奥运会期间，有一大批外国人来北京参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍北京的情况。 要求： 1. 100 词左右； 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史b. 有许多名胜古迹 Ladies and gentlemen，（女士们、先生们） Welcome to BeiJing， now let me introduce Beijng to you.（欢迎到北京，我来介绍北京给大家。） Beijing is a city with a long history. It is in the north of China. It has a population of 13,240,000.（北京是一个历史悠久的城市，它位于中国的北部，人口13.240.000） There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Summer Palace and so on.（北京有很多名胜古迹，象颐和园等等。） The Great Wall is a beautiful place.（ 长城是个漂亮的地方。）.There is a saying that he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. （有句谚语说：不到长城非好汉）The water in Miyun Reservoir is clean and not polluted. （密云水库的水很干净没有受污染。）There are all kinds of fish in it. （里边有各种各样的鱼。）You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there.（那里你可以划船、钓鱼或者野炊。） It is really a good place to spend your holiday. （那里真是个度假的好地方。）Besides, you can go and visit Beijing Museum. （此外，你还可以去游览北京博物馆。）There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.（那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋和化石。） I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Beijing.（我希望大家在北京玩得开心快乐。） Thank you.（谢谢） 4）、近日，你班在“知荣明耻” “八荣八耻大家谈”教育活动中，召开了一次关于学生荣辱观的主题班会。存在的问题1．不尊敬老师、家长等。2．学习散漫、考试作弊等。3．乱扔垃圾、污损环境等等。 Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss what is considered to be honorable behavior and what is shameful. （最近我们班开了个班会讨论什么是光荣和耻辱。）It is really a pity to see all this in our school.（很遗憾在学校看到这些现象）Some students don’t respect their teachers or parents. （不尊敬老是和父母）Some don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams. （作业不认真，考试作弊）Some throw wastes everywhere and pollute the environment . （到处乱扔垃圾污染环境。）It is honorable to obey the law and rules , care much about our class and study hard.（关心班级、努力学习、遵纪守法是光荣）It is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to make little effort to achieve success.（违反学校纪律、自私 骄傲是可耻的）We should respect others and think more of them than of ourselves.（我们应该尊敬别人经常关心别人）We should work hard and make much more progress to repay the society.（我们应该努力学习取得更大进步从而回报社会。）We should try our best to keep the environment clean。（我们应该想方设法保持干净的环境。） 人与环境是和谐相处的，我们生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人类只有一个地球，地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞，如果我们把它损坏了，破坏了大自然的组织，等 于消灭人类。因此，环境要与社会公德联系起来，与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。 Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment. 保护我们的城市(Saving Our City) It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water. Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers. People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution. 保卫地球(Saving the Earth) As time goes by, man is making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it . This has cause some serious problems. Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising. What should we do to save the earth ? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers. In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret. 如何保护环境(How to Protect the Environment) Good environment can make people feel happy and fit . To improve the environment means to improve our life. We should plant more trees and flowers around us . We shouldn’t cut them down . We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins. Never spit in public. Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to protect the environment. 环保(environmental matter) The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future. Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people""""s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation. In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world! 关于环境保护（水资源节约）的话题 Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water polloution are very serious . The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.. Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us. 中考英语作文范文——中学生适当的放松方式 中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三（3）班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。 对 象 二十二中初三（3）班 人 数 60人（男：31人；女：29人） 常用放松方式 1.看电视（30人） 2.玩电脑游戏（12人） 3.听音乐（8人） 4.进行体育锻炼（5人） 5.没有时间放松（5人） 你的观点 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？ 为什么？ 注意： 1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点； 2.词数：80-100。题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数。 The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax I am the monitor of Class 3,Grade3,No.22Middle School.Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. There are 60 students in my class(31 boys and 29 girls ).Different students have different ways to relax.Half of the students often watch TV.12students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are busy to relax. (As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure,every student should choose proper ways to relax.In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax.)I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides,It can help improve our health.(Therefore,I often Play pingpong after class.It’s really helpful to both my health and my study.) 中考英语作文范文——体育运动的好处和坏处 体育运动的好处和坏处(Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports) a. 体育运动的好处 b. 体育运动可能带来的副作用 c. 我参加体育活动的体会 Sports do us good in many respects (TS). It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. What""s more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health. My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good. 中考英语作文范文——北京之旅(A Trip To Beijing) On July 5th my parents took me to Beijing. We stayed at Huabei Hotel. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. We also went to the Palace Museum. The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! I visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look. The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, North Lake and Xiang Hill. I now know more about the history of China. I also like modern Beijing. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing 中考英语作文范文——坚持你的梦想 坚持你的梦想(Hold to Your Dreams) 提纲： 1．坚持梦想才有可能实现它。 2．举例说明。 Everyone has his dreams, but not all these dreams can come true. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams. Marie Curie, a famous scientist, has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to prove her discovery, she must get it and show it to the world. Then to get the new element became her dream and goal of her life. After four years"" hard work and refinement of tons of pitchblende, Marie and her hus-band at last saw the dim blue light of the new element -- radium. Her dream had come true. There are many other examples. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are popular with the public, and even the students who enter tile university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders. Hold fast to your dreams, no matter how big or small they are. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you ,sill find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true. 中考英语作文范文——我爱我的家 根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上；中文提示内容不必逐句翻译；根据英文提示,每组所写出的句数不限。(共12分) 几年以前我家只有一间小屋。三个人住一间屋真是艰难。现在我们已经搬进了一套两室一厅 的单元房。我非常高兴。当我父母做. . . , 我能. . . 。我爱我的家。 1. a few years ago, family, have one small room 2. it, be, three people, in the same room 3. now, a new flat(单元房), one living room, two bedrooms 4. be happy, my homework, quietly, my own room, my parents A few years ago, my family had only one small room. It was very hard for three people to live in the same room. Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms. I""m very happy. I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things. I love my home. 中考英语作文范文--我的家乡 请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况； (3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇6:2012中考语文作文高分有秘诀_1200字每个人都在为中考语文中作文拿高分而发愁。作文是中考语文中分数最多的一道题目，作文对于最后中考总成绩有着至关重要的作用，那么，有什么方法可以解决这个问题吗？ 1、多练审题 尤其是对于哲学性命题，涉及辩证关系的，更要深入研究其深刻内涵。审题越细，越准，越透，立意的思路就越宽，越深，越通畅，把握就越大。吃透话题的实质，弄清它究竟向我们要什么。但当材料审读感到困难时，如遇到诗歌类的材料，在读不懂的情况下，干脆撇开材料，就抓住话题来思考。万不得已时，直接以“话题”来作为作文题目，也总比无题或瞎拟题目好。材料中所说的是“事”也好“物”也好，都要与“人”挂起钩来。 2、牢记标准 什么是好文章？浓缩成八个字：“深刻，丰富，文采，创新”。心里牢记这四杆尺子，就有了作文的高标准。当然，由于电脑阅卷，要特别注意书写的美观。 3、加强理性思考 怎样才能使自己的文章观点深刻一些，视野宽阔一些，见解新颖一些，富有启发作用？ (1)运用纵向思维，由表及里、由果及因想一想，凡事都可以透过现象看到本质，透过结果看到原因。最好的思想武器是哲学，哲学是聪明学、明白学，不可不用。为什么说近墨者未必黑？外因是变化的条件，内因是变化的根据。为什么说评价玫瑰的好坏根据在花而不在刺？花是主流，刺是支流。为什么说不能让感情的亲疏远近影响认知的正误深浅？情与理，是与非，真理与谬误，感性与理性，涉及辩证唯物主义的认识论。 (2)运用横向思维，由此及彼，由点到面想一想，就可以拓宽思路，从时间到空间，从古今到中外，再看看社会，看看自己，还愁找不到最佳的立意角度吗？ (3)观点有没有启发性，这是文章拉开档次的又一个重要因素。人云亦云，老生常谈，一览无余，索然无味，那就是白开水，就是“陈言”。有了启发作用，才谈得上有意蕴，有意境，有内涵。 要想写出有启发性的观点，有一个重要技巧是常常要用上的，那就是类比推理。当然这也是由此及彼的办法。运用成功的关键，则在于抓准两件事物的相似点，否则反而节外生枝了。 4、加强材料储备 从哪些方面选材备料呢？主要是四个方面： (1)自己的生活。一要真实(切勿瞎编)；二要有内涵，有特点，有味道，有新意，确保不会与别人雷同、撞车；三要自己对这个生活材料有所感悟，且比较深刻。 (2)学识与见识。从科学、文学、哲学、美学四个方面多备点料，不求多，但求精。 (3)社会热点，媒体焦点，国内外信息。视点高，眼界宽，材料新，意义又重大，这就是有价值的素材。一要保证真实，道听途说不行；二要把握好选用的尺寸。信息材料的引用最好有准确的时间、地点、人名、数据，使之更有说服力。 (4)名人名言，格言警句。这是思想的精华，语言的典范，全人类共享的文化财富。倘能用得准确，恰到好处，无疑会给文章增色，起到画龙点睛的作用。 5、练语言，练技巧，出文采，上水平 文采是从心里流出来的真诚、自然、优美、机智和幽默。我口说我心，我手写我口而已。在你记叙、抒情、议论的时候，你的学识、见识、个性、修养、趣味、神韵也同时往外流，这就是言为心声，这就是文采。 6、力求创新 从立意选材到构思设计能出人意料，又在情理之中，人无我有，人有我优，人弃我取，人趋我避。没有逆向思维、多向思维，就很难突破思维定势和新老八股。平时背诵名言警句时，要学会分类、归纳记忆。
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇7:高考英语高分作文写作指导_700字英语学习中，在英语书面表达时，每次写作前问自己四个问题：这篇文章的体裁格式是怎样的？主体时态用什么时态？人称用第几人称？可以分几段，之间用什么过渡词、连接词？带着这四个问题去审题，搞清楚文章的主要内容，然后列出提纲。最后利用自己有把握的英语句子丰富自己的提纲就可以了。 (1)条理性。指的是合理布局文章结构。首先，在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次，根据需要，安排好段落，各段之间要层次分明，也要重视每一段的开头和结尾，开头语往往是总起句，结尾语往往是总结句。 (2)准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。高考英语作文素材。 (3)流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，清晰段落，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。 (4)简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁，不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。 (5)思想性。新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。 (6)美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。在高考书面表达中，书面整洁是也是一个主观评分标准，所以在高考中保持书面整洁是必要的。 总结：那么在高考作文中，除了自己的一些英语知识的巩固还需要的是自己的情绪和思维。写作期间保持稳定的情绪，按照自己的思维完成写作，从总结文章中—布置文章结构—使用表达的语句—下笔连贯。最后当然是要检查是否出现拼错字，句子语法有误等。
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇8:中考作文高分技巧：要走出三个误区中考作文阅卷一直为人们强烈关注，作为一名阅卷老师，怎样判卷才能对教育和社会负责，体现考试的公平和正义呢？ 在中考中，由于作文占了很大分值，且作文的评判带有很大的弹性，所以作文阅卷每年都会成为社会关注的焦点。中考作文阅卷老师如何科学公正地评判作文，我认为一定要做到以下几个方面： 是否表达了真情实感 《全日制义务教育语文课程标准(实验稿)》里对学生写作的要求中明确指出“写作要感情真挚，力求表达自己对自然、社会、人生的独特感受和真切体验”。所以，中考作文就是要考查学生是否表达真情实感？是否表达对自然、社会、人生的独特感受和真切体验？是否不说假话、空话、套话，是否在为文造情？如何理解作文的“真”？曾有阅卷老师批评学生写“挑战脆弱”、“追求坚韧”等话题作文时，有占一半以上的学生写了“父母病亡”的现象，但如果对这类作文都以歧视的眼光来看，那不是对真有这种情况的学生不公平吗？所以作文的“真”决不能与生活的“真”划等号。一位专家说，艺术所要求的真实性不是严格的生活真实性，无论作品的内容如何虚构，只要符合鉴赏者的审美视界，使他们感到可信，得到他们的认同，就有艺术的真实性。”作文的“真”应立足于“真的情感”、“真的体验”、“真的事理”，最终应归于“言语表达的真实”。因为只有“言语表达的真实”才能达到上述效果。有的作文虽“真”犹“假”，虽然写的是发生在自己身边真实的事情，但没有深厚的语言功力表现自己真实的情感，读来味同嚼蜡，让评判者感觉“假”；反之，有的作文写的事虽然不是真实发生在自己身上，但读来让人感到身临其境，产生共同的审美感，这就使评判者感觉“真”。作为阅卷老师在评判时，切不可简单从“事情是否真的发生过”来评判作文的真假，而应该从文章中获得的感受来评判是否“情感真挚、体验真切、事理正确”，这样就可以评判作文是否真实。 内容健康立意深刻 不知什么原因，在近年来的中考作文题中，只提体裁要求，字数要求，几乎不提内容健康、立意深刻的要求。巴金曾经对文学的功能作了这样的概括：文学的目的就是要使人变得更美好。学生写作的目的也是“使人变得更美好”。过去我们传统意义上“内容健康、立意深刻”的要求很大程度上带有政治色彩，在作文评判中给了作文“定性”的标准，这对考生和老师都是一种束缚。近几年来大家感觉到，中考作文命题者几乎都在试图不在政治的范围内寻找命题因素，而转向在情感心灵、生活态度、过程方法上来寻找作文的话题，这既是让考生有与自己生活实际紧密联系的东西可写，也是在避免学生因不谙政治可能带来的失误。其实，每个学生的作文都有一个“内容健康、立意深刻”的问题，在《全日制义务教育语文课程标准(实验稿)》中就提出“努力建设与现代社会发展相适应的语文课程，在培养学生思想道德素质、科学文化素质等方面发挥应有的作用”、“语文课程还应重视学生的品德修养和审美情趣，使他们逐步形成良好的个性和健全的人格，促进德、智、体、美的和谐发展”。作文是语文的有机组成部分，作文的考查怎么能不要“内容健康、立意深刻”呢？所以，在中考作文阅卷中，要对学生作文进行“内容健康、立意深刻”的评判，看作文内容反映的东西是否是时代的主流，是否带有暴力、恐怖、色情的倾向，作文的立意是否扬善惩恶，是否颓废堕落。文如其人，文由心生，在中考作文的评判上要有道德的审美性，要知善从善，要用文明进步的标尺来引导当代青年学生积极向上的人生观和价值观。 作文要走出三个误区 一是以作文字体优美、卷面整洁来认定作文的“美”，作文字写得优美、卷面整洁固然值得鼓励，在评判时也应根据评分标准给予一定的分数，但毕竟此项只占3、5分，最根本的还是写作内容和表现的思想情感；二是以华丽词藻为美。当前，学生“背”作文的现象很严重，极个别学校还“创造”了“万能作文法”(见《语文教学通讯(初中刊)》2007年第3期《谁能为“万能作文法”送终》)，我们不反对作文的语言华美，但如果用背来的东西堆砌而成，这样的作文是没有生命力的。所以，阅卷老师要细品学生作文中写得很“亮”的东西，思考其与作品主题的关联度，是否是作者的原生态语言，不能被“美色”所迷惑；三是以样式艳奇为美。有好多学生“东施效颦”，动不动在作文前头来个“题记”，有的甚至在文章结束时还要加上一个“后记”。一篇很短的文章，是否真有必要在开头和结尾都添个“题记”和“后记”呢？作文的样式要为内容服务，一篇作文如果仅是外在包装华丽，而内容空泛，那决不是优秀的作文。所以，中考作文的评判，要有正确的审美观。我以为作文之美在于三个方面：一是情感思想之美。阅卷老师在判阅作文时，能否体验到作者表达的情感和思想，这种情感思想能否让读者产生美感、受到震撼；二是思维之美，作文是学生在有限的时间内用言语文字来表达自己的情感和思想的思维活动，思维的合理、连贯以及表现出来的智慧都是充满美感的；三是语言之美。语言美在于能否淋漓尽致地表达作者的情感和思想，即俗话说的是“自然而然地流淌出来的”，而不是“如挤牙膏一般挤出来的”。本文选自《迷鹿Sheila》的博客（来源：新浪教育）
初中英语作文高分秘诀篇9:中考英语作文写作指导记叙文记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" W "（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个" H "（ how ）。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。 一、记叙文的特点 1. 叙述的人称 英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如： The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it. 用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如： Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea. 2. 动词的时态 在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。 3. 叙述的顺序 记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。 4. 叙述的过渡 过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如： In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise. The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright. What a moving and unforgettable scene! 5. 叙述与对话 引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果： I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released. 这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整： I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It"s you." I said, quite released. 二、写好记叙文的基本要领 1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H "，但动笔之前，围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。 2. 突出中心，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如： One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went. When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger. I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!" 3. 用活语言，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。 原文： One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn"t take it. She served them with tea but they left. 修改后： The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him. "Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked. "I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying. "Don"t worry, we"ll send you home." And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy"s house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it. When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
云课堂(www.e-laoshi.com)研究生,考研,本科大学,MBA,高考,成人自考,艺考,中专,技校,职业学校,高职,卫校录取分数,成绩查询,招生简章等信息